Nothing breaks forever

Nothing breaks forever my friend.

You may trip when you find yourself up against
The success of a friend,
You may find yourself betrayed by your dreams,
None of them coming now,
It may seem as though the flat open land before you is being squashed
By the grey clouds floating overhead,
And that the silver light that suffuses the sand is laughing
At you,

You see the frog there?
Still,
By the small cactus,
Whose shadow is stretching far beyond it,
He lost his parents in the flood when he was born, and bellows loudly,
As now,
At dusk,

You see that snake beside him?

He is tasting the air for fear, see
The flash of lightening is followed by the lashing of his tongue, see
The metallic taste pleases him,

You see yourself beside them?

You were not born on this sterile landscape,
To weep and look forlorn,

Can you feel my hand around you?
I am holding you in my palm and trying not to frighten you,

I will not leave this place without you, because I like your
Smell
And your feet

And I cannot cast you down the ravine
Just to drink of your wounds,

I have seen the gash,
And watched you rub ash into it,

And heard you cry out

I am aware that you miss your friends,
And the places you visited in the past,

You will not suffer much longer,
I promise,

I promise that all the angry clouds will melt away
Like ripples in a pool,

I promise you that the snake and the frog
Will not dance this dance of death much longer,
I cannot bear sharp fangs
Killing
For the sake,
Of a bit of fruit.

I will not let my creation wither in fear of failure,
or the appearance of black space.

What is broken,
I promise I will fix,
And then allow from now on, your wish…
Carry with you,
Your memory.

I am the wind, warm against your skin,
I am the snow
Into which you put your feet,
I am the faint orange light out where
Sky and Earth meet.

I am the alien who put you here.
I am sorry.
And I love you
And I will not accept defeat.

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28 thoughts on “Nothing breaks forever

  1. Nonnymonster says:

    Wow. You had me at the title, and you didn’t stop.

  2. kolembo says:

    patrice berry says:

    January 18, 2011 at 2:25 am (Edit)

    so far, this is my favorite. i needed this today.

    Reply

    Mad Hatter says:

    January 18, 2011 at 5:13 pm (Edit)

    *_* I L.O.V.E. this!

    Reply

  3. Once says:

    I enjoyed these sentiments; you must have enjoyed writing this. Congratulations.

  4. This is brilliant, stellar, commanding…I can’t go any further without slipping into purple prose. Wow!

  5. Jessica says:

    This moves along very strongly with confident words. I just had to finish it. You paint some great images here!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/

  6. Jingle says:

    well expressed message.
    thanks for sharing…

    A++

  7. I love it when I can identify with a poem… and this one speaks to me profoundly.

    I’m quickly becoming a fan of your poetry.

    Yours sincerely,
    Your fellow Klingon.

  8. thingy says:

    Wow. This was moving.

  9. Thanks for this post. I inevitably agree with what you are saying. I have been talking about this subject a lot lately with my father so normally this will get him to see my point of view. Fingers crossed!

  10. lolamouse says:

    So glad I picked your blog to explore this week! Your work is amazing! I’m in awe of this poem. It’s uplifting and inspirational. I love the title as well.

  11. Hello there, WE agree with a person, in the event you visit Romania there is a ale from myself: ) Many thanks!

  12. This poem means so much to me, and it has so many levels. Very fine. Thank you.

    I am so glad you stumbled upon my blog, because it enabled me to stumble upon yours! I think I’ve gotten the better end of that deal! I’m looking forward to lots of great reading and pondering. Hope you can get a laugh or be stimulated by what you find in my very eclectic blog. Please do submit an entry in my blogaversary contest!

  13. mairmusic says:

    I like this world you have conjured up– here and above.It somehow opens the door to a future.

  14. Catalyst says:

    Positive, endearing, and intimate. This is a true piece of art, my friend.

    Thank you,

    ~Cat

  15. You have beautiful words. Poignant and heartfelt.

  16. theonlycin says:

    I like the promise …

  17. I know this is off topic – but you actually have a channel devoted entirely to crime? (of course we have channels with crime shows, but they have to share with hospital shows and family shows and comedies and news, etc…)

  18. danroberson says:

    Wish I had written it. Very inspiring and well written. Thanks for sharing.

  19. I find this poem to be very encouraging to me…much needed. Thank you for sharing it.

  20. penpusherpen says:

    I am everything and in all things…Wonderful words.

  21. jessiecarty says:

    Thanks for stopping by my blog :) Hope you’ll join in some of the poetry discussions and poem sharing on thursdays in particular!

  22. Linn says:

    hey! thanks for subscribing :)
    this is a beautiful poem, I’m glad I realised it was about God before seeing the tag!

  23. Simply beautiful! Thank you.
    I subscribed and your poems have been arriving just after 10 in the morning – a perfect time to break and ponder a bit.

  24. this has become an instant classic for me. captivating!

  25. I really enjoyed this! It spoke to me today, thank you for sharing!

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