Her leg will be amputated but,
Non-collapsible items like,
Book-shelves and fathers
Can make a space to survive.
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Heart-wrenching poem.
Concise and pithy..you conceal pain and endurance in a few short lines. Well done. Thanks, Gay @beachanny Thanks for linking to #oneshotwednesday @onestoppoetry
oh the opening line grips and lets it go from there…felt this one deep…heavy one shot
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You are gifted, my friend! This poem was vivid and very moving. Poor babies!!
K
The heartbreak is so overwhelming at times. Unfortunately, this is a reality for many. Those poor babies.
lovely way to portray some sadness in life.
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A very profound and heartbreaking poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Amazing the impact 20 words can make – if you can see which 20 words to choose and how to arrange them. You, my friend, have an amazing eye for words.
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I had to read this and re-read
I like poetry that becomes personal
this to me is a child in an place that is war-torn, or has been hit with a disaster
the amputation is more what has been taken from her heart
Nicely stated
it makes me feel askew– in a most good way. striking. indeed. striking. thanks for your continued visits. i enjoy your work very much. always unique and forces me to pause. please continue writing and i’ll continue reading.
Very sad. There is a place for her.
Thank you for sharing.