Take me for a ride lord,
Along moon-beams and pine,
Among drinkers of wine,
And friends.
♦photo – personal♦
evocative short poetry – words move
Short Poetry
words move
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Lovely!
Good Times!
~Peace,
Noble
Stunning piece. Nice.
Check out “onechangeatatime”‘s poem titled ‘You & I’
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This one’s good – it sings …
- sight, smell, sound, taste and calm emotion – encapsulated …
Friends!!!
now that would be a ride never forgotten…,
Again a long story in a short few lines.. Wonderful!
You have a rare voice, Kolembo. Lovely.
Hi, kolembo. This is so beautiful! “Along moon-beams and pine” is wonderful. I can’t think of a better place to drink wine with friends. You paint a lovely picture (and tell a story) with few words. Awesome!
Eek! ‘poem’.
I want in on that ride.
Loved this posm.
where do i get on board?
Another great write…well done.
Wow! You’re amazing… I am inspired by you and I attempted to write a few lines myself… Would you be so kind to read it and give me your feedback?
You & I
Thanks for the inspiration and thanks for the read.
I’m riding this moonbeam, for sure. Wonderful little piece.
You’ll touch the lives of others as you ride moonbeams and pine. Enjoy.
Very nice.
Lovely and delightfully subversive in a completely benign and personal sort of way… Where does art begin and life end? Hmmm… don’t like that? Me neither. where does life begin and art end? Much better.
question is – is it a spiral or a circle? And does it matter?
Nice. “moon-beams and pine” is very comforting. And friends “divine”?
Your prodigious output puts me to shame. Very well done. I especially like this particular poem as well as “keep me out of this one”. I read that quite a few times yesterday and last night, and stared at the photo for a long while. I don’t know if it had anything directly & tangibly to do with the poem, or was merely a photo that fit, but either way, it worked.