Long ago under a large Banyan tree,
Or could have been by a Mountain,
Or surrounded by Aztec Aliens,
Or nestled amongst the pyramids,
Around a crack in the earth,
Called the Nile,
Clans
-like arms to the body or toes to the feet-
would meet.
“The village is hungry,
Who will go?”
Men would gather and wait.
Those with sight,
Would step to the precipice,
And hand over brow,
Describe the land,
Others would record,
Curious creatures with furious breath,
Clattering battles and victory.
Together, shaking charms and crying-
Hayanga! -
hey would race across the plain,
Some, left into the scorching sun,
Others right,
Into wind and thunder -
The footage broke as Mayan mothers bathed their naked babies,
And husbands flung arrows at loggers.
A society will die without its exiles,
Thrown out for some way of being,
Its pioneers leaving for lack of oxygen,
Shunned as Westerners,
Too,
Rich speak poise,
Too,
Down through the nose,
Yet -
If all we do is reach backwards,
Only backwards to find ourselves,
We find ourselves freshly raped,
Just raped,
Always raped.
See Immigrant
♦photo – Harry Benson at gettyimages.com & Juan Medina for RUETERS at totallycoolpix.com♦
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[...] I’ve done this before with ‘Radio Wars’ and on ‘The Courtyard’ and on ‘Independence and Exile’ and on ‘Why we fight’ – it was the same uncomfortable feeling every [...]
You speak my heart and mind both here!
I am still admiring the crafstmanship…
~Cat
Beautiful – truly :O)
ouch! This speaks of an immigrant experience which I know too well, once you leave, you are rejected…in a way!
Nice piece!
Exile. Chilling existance whether we choose it or have it forced upon us. But we are poets paving the way for possiblity…
Well done and makes one think. I like this poem on many levels. Thank you.
Oh, typos, typos. Sorry for that …
your words as always point the finger, and make us think again. AS we have seen and heard of horrors, but it’s easy to turn a blind eye…To say this has been done and we can do nothing…but we can learn and hope to God that something somewhere changes…Maybe only a little, but changes for the better, and so called civilisation learns a lesson. a much needed lesson… xPenx
A very thought provoking poem.
Exiles take many forms. Some are self imposed, as society is rejected. Some are imposed by society, pushing the undesireables out. So it is as new worlds are discovered, the exiles tame the new frontiers and push their exiles out even further. Writers and other artists tend to build our own truths and outposts close to the edges and let our imaginations step forward and prepare the impossible for the exiles. Dangerous dreamers hiding in the open.
…too true…you have quite a way with words. To the dangerpus dreamers then..
Your photo choices undo me…