Root canal

short poetry, words move, coral, diversity, environment, kindness,

 

There’s a starfish in my tooth he says,
A golden starfish nestling in the reef,
Infecting the coral and,

I’m in the deep blue ocean,
Among sea creatures,
Yellow and purple jellyfish,
Undulating in the current,
Stingrays swooping by,

Luminescent seaweed hanging over caves,
Like electric blue curtains,
At a tatoo parlour.

An octopus rakes the sea floor with a puff-adder,
And shoals of Zebra fish stop,
Long streams of impatient shark traffic,
For boisterous packs of anemone in school uniforms.

My dentist wields a wand.

-photo – johneasley.com -                                                                                             evocative short poetry – words move

Harlequin Shrimp, Indonesia (National Geographic)


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29 thoughts on “Root canal

  1. sweat says:

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  3. trisha says:

    just hilarious! loved the trip to the ocean.

    visiting you from Jingle’s blog,
    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/
    Happy Rally!

    trisha

  4. my root canal session was never so inspiring. I just wanted it to get over and head home. so clourful and clever imagery like a fairy tale

  5. Jingle says:

    I know you are in already, have fun! :)

  6. Olivia says:

    Root Canal reminds me of the one that was done by my dentist!!!!! lolss

    Wonderful words woven together.. :)

    May I please invite you to join us for Thursday Poets Rally week 38, where all of your entries are to be fully represented after the collection is over. Link one of your poems via the link below and enjoy encouragements from fellow poets.

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.blogspot.com/

    Sending you loads of wishes-
    from officials at Thursday Poets Rally community
    xoxox

  7. What a perfect way of experiencing a dentist’s office visit! Were you on Nitrous Oxide? :-D

  8. If only it were all that pleasant! What drugs did your dentist give you? Ha … kidding.

    Love all the color and movement and this is just plain CLEVER! :-)

  9. Mike Patrick says:

    What’s the name of your dentist? He uses some good stuff.

  10. Jingle says:

    cute…

    welcome to poets rally..

    have fun! :)

  11. Rashmi says:

    Beautiful underwater scenes you have …
    ..

  12. fiveloaf says:

    fun fun fun kolembo haha! here’s my week 38 potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/

  13. bendedspoon says:

    Such a fun read! Very creative with fresh breathe :)

  14. my root canals have never had an undersea theme. perhaps I am going to the wrong dentist.

  15. So creative, Kenneth. If I ever have to have a root canal I think I’ll meditate on this!

  16. mairmusic says:

    Fun reimaging! Or perhaps the dentist drugs… :-) Nicely written.

  17. Brendan says:

    Loved it! Those starfish can be tenacious bastards.

  18. penpusherpen says:

    a colourful, imaginative and wonderfully descriptive poem. I just wish the dentist could wave a magic wand for the coral reef that’s losing it’s life all round the World… Wouldn’t it be criminal that the life giving Coral Reef so beautiful and full of sea life should perish through climate change. xPenx

  19. Enjoyed this one…such creative imagery.

  20. Graham Nunn says:

    Impatient shark traffic… love it! Those Lost Sharks are always on the go,

  21. Carl says:

    That tooth was in a large world. Beautiful write!

  22. I love it–love what you see while “under.”

  23. I was too poor for a root canal so I guess if I wrote this poem it would have to be like a crater on the moon.
    Love the juxtapose and the wonderful images.

  24. dan says:

    Quite a crowded reef, full of imagery of fish,
    Perhaps you’ve had one too many seafood dish,
    This just might be a multi-colored nightmare,
    Induced by drugs while in the dentist’s chair,
    I promise not to stare as he drills for gold,
    Or laugh at stories he says pirates once told,
    While the wand is ridding the tooth of decay,
    Dream of the fishes, and you’ll come out okay.

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