There’s a starfish in my tooth he says,
A golden starfish nestling in the reef,
Infecting the coral and,
I’m in the deep blue ocean,
Among sea creatures,
Yellow and purple jellyfish,
Undulating in the current,
Stingrays swooping by,
Luminescent seaweed hanging over caves,
Like electric blue curtains,
At a tatoo parlour.
An octopus rakes the sea floor with a puff-adder,
And shoals of Zebra fish stop,
Long streams of impatient shark traffic,
For boisterous packs of anemone in school uniforms.
My dentist wields a wand.
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just hilarious! loved the trip to the ocean.
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my root canal session was never so inspiring. I just wanted it to get over and head home. so clourful and clever imagery like a fairy tale
You are a creative one…Loved it!
JP
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Root Canal reminds me of the one that was done by my dentist!!!!! lolss
Wonderful words woven together..
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What a perfect way of experiencing a dentist’s office visit! Were you on Nitrous Oxide?
If only it were all that pleasant! What drugs did your dentist give you? Ha … kidding.
Love all the color and movement and this is just plain CLEVER!
Hit your Blogsurfer. Don’t know about you, but I’m taking mine down. It’s useless.
What’s the name of your dentist? He uses some good stuff.
cute…
welcome to poets rally..
have fun!
Beautiful underwater scenes you have …
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fun fun fun kolembo haha! here’s my week 38 potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/09/30/i-cant-hold-it/
Such a fun read! Very creative with fresh breathe
my root canals have never had an undersea theme. perhaps I am going to the wrong dentist.
So creative, Kenneth. If I ever have to have a root canal I think I’ll meditate on this!
Fun reimaging! Or perhaps the dentist drugs…
Nicely written.
Loved it! Those starfish can be tenacious bastards.
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a colourful, imaginative and wonderfully descriptive poem. I just wish the dentist could wave a magic wand for the coral reef that’s losing it’s life all round the World… Wouldn’t it be criminal that the life giving Coral Reef so beautiful and full of sea life should perish through climate change. xPenx
Enjoyed this one…such creative imagery.
Impatient shark traffic… love it! Those Lost Sharks are always on the go,
Oh I like this one.
That tooth was in a large world. Beautiful write!
I love it–love what you see while “under.”
I was too poor for a root canal so I guess if I wrote this poem it would have to be like a crater on the moon.
Love the juxtapose and the wonderful images.
Quite a crowded reef, full of imagery of fish,
Perhaps you’ve had one too many seafood dish,
This just might be a multi-colored nightmare,
Induced by drugs while in the dentist’s chair,
I promise not to stare as he drills for gold,
Or laugh at stories he says pirates once told,
While the wand is ridding the tooth of decay,
Dream of the fishes, and you’ll come out okay.