And he’s richer than them,
With ragged red hair,
Made his money on skin products,
He’s off to the Zoo on the community bus,
Blue suede and a white scarf around his neck,
He’s going to give a lot of money away,
Because he’s richer than they are.
Up north they speak a different sort of English,
Years of cigarettes have given them all cancer.
The windows are small,
Slits in concrete,
Enough to see through and notice,
Neighbours having tea.
It’s a miserable life without money here,
And under the ceiling that’s peeling,
The old man with cancer,
Who doesn’t like charity,
Is whispering that he’d rather have company.
The two,
Big-boned, raggedy spirited,
Awkward teenage boys playing pool at the youth center,
Though,
Are astonished at the amount the mans says he’s,
Here to give them,
And the thought that,
That shiny new thing could be theirs now-
To keep the roof from falling.
Tell me you wouldn’t smile.
evocative short poetry – words move

Definitely kind of ironic thinking about the wealthy man on the community bus. Why no car? Or, even moreso, no chauffeur if he is really THAt wealthy? Am glad that now that he apparently knows he is dying he is going to do good with his $$. Thus I like the guy.
interesting storytelling.I am still undecided whether my smile should be sincere or ironic.rewards several readings.
I would smile! In fact, I did. This was a hoot to read. Lots of fun. Well done.
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I like it that the man who Has is seeing fit to help those who Need. A nice topic!!!!
interesting story, thanks for sharing!
I actually found the poem a bit chilling! Maybe I’m a bit on the suspicious side = but his gifts seemed a bit ambiguous. Very interesting. k.
yes, it’s two things really. when it came to me, the first images where of those who receive a large amount of money (to them at least) and it makes such a difference. But the next was of a man for whom money means nothing, trying somehow to make sense of his life!
I’m looking for a way to make the fact that the cash can REALLY make a difference pop a bit more!
Thanks for coming by!
nice story telling man…and i am glad that in the end he has a heart and is giving to them and i hope they take it and use it responsibly as well…when you have little, when given much we often blow it quick not used to the new life…
Yeah, when it rains, it pours – I hope I’m installing gutters that lead to a good water-tank!
By the way, I’m still growing folks, so ANY kind of comment and ALL comments are perfectly acceptable!
Help me grow eh…if there’s something off, something you felt, anything at all, just say and tell me why – some poems I know exactly are finished, others need a push from the reader to clarify words or meanings or experience!
Mwah all, by the way! I feel a few more coming!
You are a magician with your words
hi laurie, thanks!
These two have a bit of growing left me thinks, but it’a nice to get something down on paper!