A brook runs through my Grandmas farm,
That used to carry gold.
My Grandpa
-Benjamin-
Did not yield the land,
To the British, who wanted it dammed.
In 1968, they took him in,
To have his appendix removed,
And Grandma never remarried.
My Aunt Alice,
Was a witch.
She flew in on broomsticks
We never saw,
But heard in the barn,
Where she parked.
She brought foreign sweets that didn’t
Crack our lips,
And told us naughty jokes.
-Oh Pope the Bastard,
Please pass the Custard!-
We’d squeal and never tell,
And feel all grown up and,
Conspiratorial.
Grandma says she died running with
The wrong pack,
That she was knocked from the sky,
By a cross.
Later we learned,
It was a broken heart that did it, that
Grandma wouldn’t accept a,
Jewish man in the house,
So she killed herself.
Mary was dead when we got here,
Her tree is the prettiest.
It’s a large yellow poplar that
Trembles in the slightest breeze.
She was a violinist,
A frail, little thing, who
Is fading away in family photographs.
Irridescent sparrows trill,
Beautiful harmonies,
From skinny branches,
Shielded by the most delicate,
Drooping fronds.
You see, my Grandmother has three beautiful trees,
Growing in her garden,
One for Benjamin, one for Alice, one for Mary.
My grandmother used to sit under these trees.
They’re feeding off the bones she says.
♦photo – personal♦
evocative short poetry – words move

This is just a wonderful poem; so compressed but covers so much territory, all vividly. Really fine work. K.
so much of the true touch of the past, instantly reminded me of the very human close feelings from both of my grandmothers, wonderful!
esp liked,
“My Aunt Alice,
Was a witch.
She flew in on broomsticks
We never saw”
i have a distinct experience from as a young boy similar to that, yes wonderful piece, the magic of another time, yet, here it is, right now
wow..this is a powerful piece of writing…great story telling..excellent job on conveying the emotions as well without getting even close to sentimental..like it much..and just loved the broomstick part with aunt alice..i wish i had a broomstick myself to fly around a bit..smiles
Great narrative to a powerful story. Thank you.
I really enjoyed your poem. very evocative and great descriptions!
A beautiful and intriguing poem.
I am so glad I stopped in. Your poetry is powerful, and pared down to essential beauty of the words and images. Those trees are stuck in my mind. Amazing ending.
Wow. Seriously. Wow. This is amazing storytelling and imagery. I can see them all: wild Alice, frail Mary, Benjamin who stood his ground and Grandma who is very complicated. I love this piece.
Thanks! Ya…grandma…I tell ya!
Kolembo, I feel sewn into this. It is under my skin and I can’t get away from all of the images. The delicate brutality of death. Just beautiful.
Thanks there!
I enjoyed reading this very much, a short story of poem..Bless
This is gorgeous writing. The trees representing the people, and I do believe our ancestors are with us, guiding and helping, and that the trees DO feed on the bones, if that’s what Grandma says. My grandma is my guardian angel.
Rich, dramatic, evocative work, K.. Peace, Amy
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Wow! If this, to boot, is actually paying homage to your own family (I mean, autobiographical): stunning beauty AND courage/respect. Truly moved.
Though not really autobiographical, though pretty surely much of my own into it anyway, I keep a blog where I share some of the tales and a few poems I have written over the past few years. Pieces both in English and Spanish (second and mother tongue, respectively). Everyone more than welcome to have a browse and a read, share, follow, leave comments et al.
http://www.avadapalabra.wordpress.com
you tell so much & so well of the family story in these short little lines… evocative indeed.
LOVED the part about Aunt Alice parking her broomstick. Giggle.
I believe my grandma died of a broken heart (in a way) too. She didn’t want to fight anymore.
Lovely poem. <3
Yeah…I wonder what happens to us if we go naturally…you know…how do you do it? Is it like going to the dentists?
What a lovely poem. thanks!
I really like this – the way the trees reflect those they represent. That generation you describe was truly unique in their faithfulness to loved ones. Very inspiring.
My grandma never remarried either… beautiful poem. Might be perfect, actually.
A really interesting look into your family history. It’s great that you are keeping your origins alive by writing about those who’ve influenced you. Very nicely done.
This is a gorgeous poem and the sense of history and the affection you have towards these people really shines through. There’s a lot of love within your words.
i like this~
There is so much in this, Kenny…so much that resonates with me. (My grandpa taught me how to pan for gold and fought the gov’t for the rights to the property he had claimed in gold country!) I love the way you tour us through a family archive in a bit of a matter-of-fact way, tied in with landscape and trees. And how you allow us to fill in the blanks…”grandma never remarried.”
She died a few years ago. You know, her not re-marrying absolutely amazes me. Nor did my fathers mum. A different age. Fifty years without your loved one…and there was no distracting them, no. They simply knew where they were going. Thanks for the comment!
Kolembo, I do not have words sufficient to say how beautiful this is.