They say that Africans,
Will have to fight for a place on the bus,
So I am pulling out all the stops.
I am burning incense and,
Turning out closets,
-exorcising demons-
I am fumigating my life,
Throwing out old clothes and,
Trying to curry favour,
-surely children were not meant for the streets,
Nor nations meant for war-
I have found sack cloth and ash and,
I intend to,
Gouge flesh with home-made irons
Flagellate until I bleed sin,
All over the carpet.
There will be gnashing of teeth,
And great wailing,
-effort must be made-
I shall identify,
Church pews with nails and,
Kneel!
But the spotlight keeps missing me,
And I manage only to elicit,
Splendid chuckles from my nephew.
♦photo - Irving Penn @ Wikipedia♦
evocative short poetry – words move

Amazing poem. Really the roller coaster ride is tremendous – poignant for all its humor; very well done. k.
very brilliant.
A very evocative poem. Things like flaggilation go far beyond my understanding. I love the end as if all these relegious efforts don’t attract the right attention. Great poem
Yes, I agree. I’m a Christian, but sometimes I’m not so sure we have it right – I’m not sure we have a true picture of God, and I’m certainly not sure that we understand how to worship.
true
The power of your imagery is incredible Kolembo
K,
So true, children were not meant for the streets… that is why that laugh from your nephew is something to value forever!
Keep bringing the joy,
G