Dreams of Black Incompetence

We are looking again,
through misty dawns,
laden with empty,

promises of wealth,

not ours to hold,
or caress him with,
white man,
brother too,

or guide him by the hand,
to graze on greener pasture,

-fields of love-

Or raise him from this,
Dreams of black incompetence.


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12 thoughts on “Dreams of Black Incompetence

  1. cloakedmonk says:

    Tragically wonderful. It is hard to understand how people could have become so lost that this brought joy. It is, as said above, Strange Fruit.

  2. Catalyst says:

    People become so easily lost…

  3. […] so I went to investigate and you can find the post that fuelled my poetic flame here sounds of smiling and […]

  4. alisonamazed says:

    Your poetry is indeed Strange Fruit. It tells a black story in a fruitful way. 🙂

  5. Intelligent fool says:

    I have liked this post, although to be honest I really don’t…

  6. penpusherpen says:

    Horrendously unbelievable times, ably expressed by your haunting words. Hitting hard, but then how else can you paint the picture of man’s inhumanity to man.

  7. Tilly Bud says:

    Wow! Talk about getting to the heart of things.

  8. Once again you’ve pared it down to simple truth – so simple we can’t pretend not to notice… I dream of a different tomorrow…

  9. Ronald Grey says:

    Fantastic! If I am so lucky, great minds may indeed think alike – my post today was about a theme similar to yours. See: http://wp.me/pZiAD-1Rp

  10. giulas41 says:

    You are a great Writer my friend!!! Really strong!!!

  11. The Hook says:

    Powerful, moving and deeply disturbing all at once. Excellent work.

  12. danroberson says:

    Dreams of black incompetence, men tortured or killed, unfair laws, history that should not be forgotten,….a world within a world. Your poem is a sad poem but one that must be written.
    See also http://danroberson.wordpress.com/2011/01/19/the-skunk/

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